Rain on satin blooms.
Awake from frigid slumber,
Nature’s art unfurls.
- Photo credit: sea turtle via Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND
Rain on satin blooms.
Awake from frigid slumber,
Nature’s art unfurls.
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My favorite is “satin blooms”. Really perfect.
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Thanks. Through all my rewrites of this little poem, that remained the same. I’m glad you liked it.
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I love how (for me) the haiku inspired a smile. Blooms, indeed! 🙂
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I’m glad! Thanks. 🙂
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I liked reading two meanings into your first line: rain, on satin, blooms evoking how water spreads on fabric; and rain, on satin blooms evoking flowers made of fabric.
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I love your first meaning. I wish I’d seen that. The difficulty in writing this little haiku was that of feeling constrained by the nature theme. It kept wanting to be something else.
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