Someday They Will Care For You

A bitter pill, swallowed whole, of censure and spite awaited her as she entered the house. Critical mass. Her bags were unloaded – so much baggage.

“Your room is over there.”

Fingers pointed.

Shuffling, she closed the door, finally tastingย her own medicine.

13 thoughts on “Someday They Will Care For You

  1. I like how you highlighted her loneliness by suggesting that people were around her doing things (Fingers pointed, bags unloaded) but never giving them bodies or voices!


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